Lyric attempts

Hi all

it sure has been a very very loooong time since Ive written or even submitted anythign here

I somehow ended up writing a couple of lyrics, since I got in to my "lyrics mode" which is very rare for me to

well, here's the first one

Quit toying with my heart
its not a funny game
makes me cry day and night
then you laugh its lame
I've been so true to you
I shrived to stay away

some how you always pulled me in
you and kicked me me back again
and so on with this dreadful game

its breaking my heart
you setting us apart
smothering my breath
enclosing me to death

just look around, and you'll hear the sound
... of my aching heart in pain

as for the second one, its my in cell phone, and the battery  is dead

... soo ... em... what do you guys think?

anyone there willing to compose music for it and sing it?